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Mario’s advices

1.add some anticipation before his action.

2.allow action time/ pause before the next park

3.title push character

 

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These are the basic requests of the film. Luckily, I think i totally follow them. These is the part which i gave to teacher to see. PS: because it is gif,  i find the color of it is not what i draw on the computer. Fewer details and colors.

This is it’s actual colors.

 

 

 

 

 

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Try to follow teacher’s suggestions and change my film.

anticipation——

 when the little boy throw away the stone, he can’t throw it directly. As the first picture shown, the boy show make his hands back and then throw it away. so NO.1 to NO.2 to NO.3.

But my classmate Amber who always have amazing and interesting ideas ask me, why i don’t make the hands turn like a wheel? I said, yes, it will be more interesting.

But i try many times, i don’t know how to draw the wheel in the high speed. Amber gives me many examples, and draws the pictures for me. I forgive to save them, next time i will remember.

Duang~ Duang~Duang~ following is changed actions.

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title push character + anticipation—–

Mario said, he thinks if the title push the boy will create an interaction between title and boy.

I think this suggestion will make my film better.

But when i am drawing, i meet some problems.

 

First, because my fault, i didn’t consider about the future’s modification. So i draw the title and characters on the same layer. So when i change the pictures which has title, i have to think about the changing of title.

Second, i think if the title push the character, the character also need the action of pushing.

So i choose to draw the push action after this picture. Because in the former work, after it is the title appearing.

So the action will be NO.1 to NO.2 to NO.3

 

 

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add more pictures between the boy running for the stone—-

Almost all the pictures of running have title… At the former change, i want to save my time, so try to not change the title, but this time, i have to change.

I have to use some time to make the title on the independent layer.

 

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I add more pictures between the running.

 

 

 

 

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